notice how Jeniffer misconstrues the question from the audience and thus helps Craig (the question simply asked what was he doing with all that money... aka the huge net profits) :
question:" you’re on track to make $55 million in revenues, you have 23 employees, what are you doing with all that money?" (last paragraph)
Jeniffer's misconstruction:
"Asked what he was doing with the riches he had earned [my emphasis]"
(third paragraph from the bottom)
this conveys a very different idea to the reader... (much more favorable to Craig)
Delia
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